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Look, look aunt fenix it is snowing! Can i go out and play in the snow? Sure you can Zena! This child have i wach over since you died! I see so  much of you Raven in her, she have the same friendly eyes as you did have! She have the same energy and determination as you did ones! She have grown to a cute and respectable young litle girl, you would have been proud of her! Raven, i miss you so much! Raven if you just could be here, we should have so much fun the three of us! But you was taken from us too early, much too early! Every time she ask about you, i am telling how wondeful you were. And how much you loved her! Raven if you can heare my thoughts so must you know that i love you all off my heart and you are misst! I hope that you and i will meet soon again but not too soon, because i have too look after your litle girl gets the best childhood i can give her!
©2009-2010 ~Frog-crazy
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:iconteague-drydan:
I'll be the first to admit that I have not read thru the entire poem, I'm just curious as to how this qualifies as a "limerick"?

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i was in a hurry so i just put it there for the moment
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oh, ok.

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mm but were shall i put it? i dont know ^^;
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if you want to keep it in poetry, i'd suggest either fixed (prose poems are becoming a more formal form of poetry) or open.

if you change it to prose, (and this were my piece) i'd probably go with prose>fiction>family life.

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thx for the help! ^-^
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welcome

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